tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647781709349216836.post9062742306151495225..comments2023-08-03T03:28:05.196-07:00Comments on Webb's Blog: @ Alan - Further RefinementsAdam Webbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17905614077239124172noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647781709349216836.post-9635443122844488542012-05-02T07:39:46.776-07:002012-05-02T07:39:46.776-07:00I appreciate the feeback and thanks for having a l...I appreciate the feeback and thanks for having a look at the new ideas and I realise what you are saying <br /><br />I have done the four key frame story board you mentioned on the two stronger ideas : The Paradox and Holiday as I really liked these ideas and wondered if there was a way to shorten them down and keep these - Anyway they will give you a better insight of what I am trying to go for and maybe there will be a way to adapt one of the ideas (MAYBE)Adam Webbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17905614077239124172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647781709349216836.post-78461480618774489212012-05-02T06:53:41.421-07:002012-05-02T06:53:41.421-07:00Hi Adam
I think all share the same problem - Too ...Hi Adam<br /><br />I think all share the same problem - Too complex. Move away from a 'Story' structure and towards a simpler 'Happening'. <br /><br />So for example in Paradox + Timeline<br /><br />Script<br /><br />Setting: White world<br /><br />Scene 1 - Caveman version of the logo alone on the left side of the scene.<br />Scene 2 - Current version of the logo arrives with a flash on the right side of the scene. It looks confused.<br />Scene 3 - A victorian version of the logo appears in the background.<br />Scene 4 - A renaissance (Da Vinci) version appears followed by a futurisc version followed by many more around the screen.<br />Scene 5: A large and final logo arrive in the middle.Alan Postingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09282179748734196674noreply@blogger.com