tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647781709349216836.post9204429558057198719..comments2023-08-03T03:28:05.196-07:00Comments on Webb's Blog: @Phil - Greenlight? Script and Essay IdeaAdam Webbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17905614077239124172noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647781709349216836.post-55332224129915397382011-03-21T11:07:27.059-07:002011-03-21T11:07:27.059-07:00Thanks for the feedback Phil, you have given me a ...Thanks for the feedback Phil, you have given me a lot to think about im not sure what u mean by the time line because i thought they already have images in them?Adam Webbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17905614077239124172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3647781709349216836.post-64874075957867342042011-03-21T06:27:23.514-07:002011-03-21T06:27:23.514-07:00Interim Online Review 21/03/2011
hey Adam,
You&#...Interim Online Review 21/03/2011<br /><br />hey Adam,<br /><br />You're working hard and digging into the animation timeline (needs images though), and also using the drawing PDFs - all good. Your choice of animator is good. When it comes to Harryhausen, you'll need to deal with the moment at which his 'special effects' became dated - Clash of the Titans represents a watershed in terms of special effects technology - in so much as movies being made at the same time (Empire Strikes Back etc.)made stop-motion look increasingly dated. In this way, I'd like you to look at the 'return to fashion' of stop-motion, with Harryhausen as the inspiration (i.e. Coraline etc.)<br /><br />The issue I still have with your story is that, in story terms, there is little difference between the stones and the apples - the action is essentially a repeat of itself - 'toadstool gets hit on head by objects...' Either edit out the second action (and so making the stones/or apples the focus of Act 2), or devise another story element that is sufficiently distinct from the first. I do like the demise of the fairy though - and in terms of design, I suggest you go for a pastiche/homage of the fairies from Fantasia...tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com