I have taken the advice in Justin's last comment to hopefully resolve the confusion and have a clear and definitive synopsis for the story and the characters.
Character Bios and Synopsis Version 2 @Justin - As usual if you could let me know if this is any better and anything that needs improving further please.
Hi Adam,
ReplyDeleteIts Looking much more defined and clear now. I think the sidekicks costume is based in an earlier idea, so I would throw out that reference - now he is associated with the villain, his attire will obviously suit his Mistress, and the mutants more.