In these thumbnails I took on aboard the advice I was given by Phil, taking out the cliches and cropping off certain door ways, windows and objects to create the subtle suspense within the scene. I like image thirty because of the angle looking up at the clock face and lights, making the decision that these objects are important but knowing why. I also think image thirty one is strong because of the wheelchair in the foreground showing the patient needs it to move around and then the unexplainable broken mirror which must of been caused by someone else in the asylum but who? Image thirty two is the idea of the broken bed frames left out in the corridor where you wouldn't expect to find them. The rest of the ideas might work with the right lighting and I think image thirty three is a good example of the atmosphere of the space abandoned and only the constant ticking from the clock can be heard.