I have taken the strengths from all the ideas I felt had potiential and from the group discussion, where I gathered a range of different ideas to create this first draft. I have gone for the root of the young disrespecting the old to show how this effects the toadstool physically and mentally so that the audience feels sorry for the character and all his weaknesses are exposed. Also there is a real sense of triumph over the fairy in the end as the toadstool makes her feel as he did as she was teasing him. I am not sure if there is enough content but i tried to keep it simple and to the one minute requirement but I would like to hear your thoughts of this idea.
Treatment for the Geriatric Toadstool 1