Hi AdamI think all share the same problem - Too complex. Move away from a 'Story' structure and towards a simpler 'Happening'. So for example in Paradox + TimelineScriptSetting: White worldScene 1 - Caveman version of the logo alone on the left side of the scene.Scene 2 - Current version of the logo arrives with a flash on the right side of the scene. It looks confused.Scene 3 - A victorian version of the logo appears in the background.Scene 4 - A renaissance (Da Vinci) version appears followed by a futurisc version followed by many more around the screen.Scene 5: A large and final logo arrive in the middle.
I appreciate the feeback and thanks for having a look at the new ideas and I realise what you are saying I have done the four key frame story board you mentioned on the two stronger ideas : The Paradox and Holiday as I really liked these ideas and wondered if there was a way to shorten them down and keep these - Anyway they will give you a better insight of what I am trying to go for and maybe there will be a way to adapt one of the ideas (MAYBE)